Peer review 7

“Purpose” This is an amazing poem. You picked up where Les Murray left off so perfectly. I am in love with your first two stanzas and how beautiful you depicted the animals. This is short and to the point. It isn’t unnecessarily long and you made it very clear the message you were trying to […]

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Peer review 6

“Week 9, Post #7” I love how you paid attention to the details and managed to find similarities between 3 quite different works. Your layout also made it easy for me to follow. There isn’t much for me to talk about because you hit the nail right on the head about Patrick White. Overall, this is […]

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Peer review 5

“Entry 3” I find your understanding of the painting quite interesting. You paid attention to even the slightest of details & explained them so thoroughly. I also like the fact that at the end you expressed that the painting is open to interpretation & your blog is just one of many. I didn’t notice at […]

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Peer review 4

“A fine line” This is such a great read. You’ve used your outlook on life to give a thorough and detailed perspective on Gilmore’s poem & I’m curious to read more. I honestly did not want this to end. There’s hardly any flaws to point out, but it wouldn’t matter anyway. You’ve done a really […]

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Peer review 2

“Oz Lit – Blog 2” This is a short but informative take on your understanding of the topic. However, it would be nice if you were able to dig a little deeper into Noonuccal’s work because I feel you have yet to see the entire picture. Another thing, I feel as if this is just your […]

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Peer review 1

“My experience in OZ Lit – Entry 1” This feels more like a short review of the novel rather than about what you’ve gained from it. Furthermore, it feels a bit rushed, you didn’t seem to have done a lot of research on the book. I suggest you spend more time to read the rest of […]

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