Peer review 3

“Mid 19th C OZ Poetry”

This is a very detailed and great read. Your interpretation of the poems gave me new insights I had never thought of. I quite enjoyed the way you expressed the contrast between these two works. The down side to this blog is that visually, it is quite bland. You should try to put in photos relating to your ideas so it can be easier for readers to follow. Another thing is your sentences are unnecessarily long. I feel they should be broken down into shorter sentences so that the message can be delivered more clearly.

https://jakematthewsblog.wordpress.com/2016/04/21/mid-19th-c-oz-poetry/

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