Peer review 2

“Oz Lit – Blog 2”

This is a short but informative take on your understanding of the topic. However, it would be nice if you were able to dig a little deeper into Noonuccal’s work because I feel you have yet to see the entire picture. Another thing, I feel as if this is just your answer to the topic, not an actual blog about the topic.
All in all, there is not much else I can say as there isn’t much needed to fix. This was a good read but as I have mentioned, it would be nice if there were more.

https://ashleycurtis1.wordpress.com/2016/04/07/oz-lit-blog-2/

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One Comment

  1. Nice tone to this peer review Jamie, but try to be more specific in your suggestions for improvement. Also I did not really understand what you meant when you said: “I feel as if this is just your answer to the topic, not an actual blog about the topic.”???

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