Peer review 1

“My experience in OZ Lit – Entry 1”

This feels more like a short review of the novel rather than about what you’ve gained from it. Furthermore, it feels a bit rushed, you didn’t seem to have done a lot of research on the book. I suggest you spend more time to read the rest of the novel so as to gain more insight and achieve a more personal understanding and deeper connection to the novel. Overall, I think it is a good read but it’s not quite there yet.

https://charleshowellsite.wordpress.com/2016/03/18/my-experience-in-oz-lit-entry-1/

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