“My experience in OZ Lit – Entry 1”
This feels more like a short review of the novel rather than about what you’ve gained from it. Furthermore, it feels a bit rushed, you didn’t seem to have done a lot of research on the book. I suggest you spend more time to read the rest of the novel so as to gain more insight and achieve a more personal understanding and deeper connection to the novel. Overall, I think it is a good read but it’s not quite there yet.